http://hora-tio.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] hora-tio.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] akainagi 2013-03-26 05:05 am (UTC)

This story is coming along very nicely...I love how you have captured the core qualities that make these characters who they are....the inner voices are a nice touch..and you have written the angsty aspect to this story really well...not to over done..it is just right..no pun intended..lol

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