Wow! Thank you! And I'm so glad to hear I'm succeeding at least somewhat on characterization. I always worry about that.
What is it about this fandom and angsty Jim? God, we just love to torture him.
I don't thing I will ever write Gary as anything other than a raging d-bag. He just begs you to hate him. I always thought he was such a jerk in tos.
Thanks again for the read and review! See you in chat. :)